Our Trip to the Port, by Caspar Denyer
Last week we went to the Port of Tauranga When we got to the port we saw a big cruise ship. On the side of the cruise ship there was some life boats.
Caspar, I love the detail you have used in this writing. You told your audience exactly where the life boats were. You have also told us "when" the trip was. Keep up the great work! Mrs Devitt.
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